Broken home

by Crystal Gaze   Apr 5, 2007


My life was taken away,
the day you ran from me.
My heart beating in a hollow hell,
there's not much to tell..

Mother left home.
leaving me alone,
to face a big and scary place,
never before faced.

Oh how you killed my world.
You stood and watched me die.
All you uttered from your mouth was lies!
and still you have not cried!

You were supposed to love me.
And love your home.
Instead you left me to be alone...

I watched as my wall caved.
Exposing my heart to pain.
I remember the bricks falling,
gaining speed, as the coldness seemed to gain

I managed to conceal,
The agony I feel.
My pain is no longer revealed,
behind the smile it's concealed.

Part two will be coming soon....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    My life was taken away,
    the day you ran from me.
    My heart beating in a hollow hell,
    there's not much to tell..

    Wow so well written and outstanding lines. Love to read the second part as soon as possible. Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    This is beautiful poem but broken. Im sry for you but it happens but i wish your mother can love you and refuse to leaven you alone. Darn, but i know u r going to be okay. It is okay for you to be angry but not all the times. Yeah...i hope i can read more poems of yours. Yup.

  • 16 years ago

    by jolene

    :) Excellent *** waiting for part two.

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Looking forward to part 2 :D

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww this is really sad, but you wrote it so well. i defiantly enjoyed reading it. you have a way with words. keep on writing 5/5

    ~Kristina

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