I really know what this feels like, it will get better though hun trust me with time. I thought this poem was really great though you could feel the emotion throughout it all. Good work 5/5 ~mel

I love this poem.
Very well written.
The flow is nice.

~Chelsea

Ohhhn excellento
ya i know what you mean,
everything can change in a heartbeat.
for the good.
or bad...
anyways this is a great poem

Very nice poem, i cant relate but i can imagine how it would feel like... the really reflects your feelings in such a beutiful way, altough there's one word "bothering" me , the <nice> in the 2nd verse i dont think it fits there, but it doesnt matter, it's still a great poem. and i would say dont qui, keep trying!

Amazing.
I know what it feels like to try and hold onto a friendship that's fading away. It hurts.
Overall, the poem was wonderful.

"But Now I feel like I'm in a constant fight.
To keep this friendship nice and tight.
You have moved on to someone new.
Someone now who's just like you. "

^ My favorite stanza. That last line hit me hard. 5/5 Keep writing.

Stephanie Lynn .+.

This poem was decent. The flow started off amazing but stuttered a little towards the end. I like the rhyme scheme overall and the poem is very passionate. All things considered it was a good write. 4/5.

"She's one you now, she did succeed"

^You want it to be "won" not "one"

Your rhymes are a little juvenile. I love your last rhyme though. It was very nice.

4/5

Ilike this poem.
It's not amazing.
But I like it.
Ways to make it better would be that
It gets kind of confusing.
Are you talking about you?
Or someone else?
And the ending..
She's one you now, she did succeed.
Do you mean
She's one of you now?
Or She has won you now..?

Great. i loved it. Last verse wasn't as good as the others but anyway, great poem. I fully únderstand what you're trying to say.
Keep it up
Take care
xoxox

I know how you feel! 5/5

Wow I can definetly relate to that! Besides it's to her boyfriend, I know how you feel! I love this poem!

Awh this is sad:[ sorry if this really happened to you but i know how losing friends is..it really sucks but eventually you will find new ones that will probably lighten your life more than your old ones did. thats what happened to me. but great poem 5/5

This is amazing. i love the rhyming & the flow.... brilliant!

Good poem. The flow was excellent and the emotion was shown.

'She's one you now, she did succeed.'

^^is it suppose to be won* not one?.

Overall, good poem.
5/5

|Sarah|

Awesome poem! i love it.. dont u just hate it when that happens?? lol.. 5/5!

Wow, I really understand what you're going through, I mean, a lot of people have gone through the same thing sort of. It was sad, but it was a really good poem! Keep on writing!

She's one you now, she did succeed.
^ It should be "won" not "one"

Awh, this was kinda sad but very powerful at the same time. The flow was good and the descritpions were well done. I lvoed all the emotion you put into it. Very well done hun. 5/5

Best friends we use to be.
use should be used .

She's one you now, she did succeed.
one should be won .

Other than that, I can feel what the poem is saying . I can`t say I relate, cuhs` I normally dupe the friends that do that, but this poem portrays the hurt within the fading friendship well . I liked it .
..__MiNDYY

Another great poem.
Sad sorry you feel this
honey. But yes things
like this happen.
Keep your head up.
God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

It's so sad losing a friend.
Losing a friend is worse then them moving away because they're still there rubbing your nose init.
But we learn to over come simpletins
:)
good luck with everything.
4.5
I gave you a 4.5 because the poem was very good all in all but lacked emotion and originality