by kiara Apr 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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Forlorn are my dreams |
by Krzysztof J
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A beautifull poem :) and so colorfull :) |
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A very good message. The flow was well done except the last line, but overall a good poem. |
by Cindy
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Great job on your poem....very deep thoughts. |