Lost love

by Shadow   Apr 6, 2007


Its dark, wet and scary but still searches on for the one he loves, he calls her name she calls back but the sound is all around the pain in his heart is killing him within wanting it to stop, wanting to hold her again wanting to see her face again.
he trips and falls in the water ready to give up he sees a shadow he heads for it as if his life depended , as he runs the darkness around him is lifting away, he stops and freezes for that he sees the one he loves leaving with the shadow it self.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Great work
    keep it up!:)
    -Lisa

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    Wow...I really like this poem! Good job<3

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by danielle

    Wow this is amazing really good but sad good job keep it up