I like it but like always i end up liking all of your poems keep it up..

I adore this..
Such a great opener and each stanza was better than the last.
Flow was flawless, imagery created vivid pictures.
You two did a great job with this!

Simply amazing.

I liked this poem, You two did an amazing job writing together i think you should more often. The imagery was beautiful and it flowed great. Also loved your ryhme scheme it was simply stunning. Well done on this beautifully written piece of poetry. Great job to both of you! ~mel

So sweet and you two did a good work together
Sometimes so collab poems suck cos they're not compatible together..but this isn't one of those
Keep it up
Have a nice day
Laura

As always one of ur best, u amaze me with ALL ur talents Karl, miss u so much, love me

Great writing, Karl. You have some real, raw talent and I think I could learn a lot from you. I'm ashamed to call myself a poet after reading an incredible poem such as this ;)

Haha, but seriously...we should write together again someday. Funny how, same poem submitted under both of our accounts, but magically...you're rating is much higher. How does that happen?

5/5! (Of course).

Beautiful collab. The beginning and ending verses are awesome....perfect ....5/5 Debbie

:) Beautiful Poem. It's emotion touches me, and it's like you've described such a beautiful feeling is such beautiful words.

An spectacular collab - with 2 very wonderful writers. The imagery was vivid & the descriptions were amazing. The flow was great & the emotions were strong. Fabulous job! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Spoke to my soul, I am breatheless I loved this poem i do beleive it is the best one i have read all night, and I have read many. perfectly written 5/5 I am adding you to my favs

Perfect...lovely...both of u hv done a great work..the imagery was perfect n the descriptions were awesome..this peice held lot of emotions..Great write...
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

I thought it was very nice. The rhyming was great and it didnt seem forced, very nice, 5/5

This was such a sweet poem and it flowed really well. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

I really liked this poem.
There was one thing though
'deserved' and 'verved'
For some odd reason I didn't like that rhyme. Maybe it was just the line that had 'deserved' in it, because it through me off, big time.
But it was an outstanding poem.
You and Jane did a great job with this poem.

Keep it up, hun.

Hmm, love sounds so strange. Do adults always feel this kind of thing? I'm a minor so I don't know these things but by reading this poem I guess it would be fun! Can't wait to grow up. 5/5!

Hmm, love sounds so strange. Do adults always feel this kind of thing? I'm a minor so I don't know these things but by reading this poem I guess it would be fun! Can't wait to grow up. 5/5!

The imagery was beautiful, the love and passion was alive.
A very good piece, a beautiful collab.
well done
love Tara-Kay
x

Wow, this poem has so much meaning in depth. i love your use of complicating yet deep volcabulary..and this poem really reflects your ability of poetry..just like a true poets xx

To start with the poem is beautiful. The vocabulary is outstanding, The poem read like a heart song, I really enjoyed reading it