Nice Nightmare?

This is great! 5/5

Lovely poem as always! :D there were a few lines that just weren't working for me though. but other than that it was great. 5/5 love.

Aw. Wow, this poem was so terrible! So sad ;[ It literatlly brought tears to my eyes. I guess because, it's such a common thing in teenagers these days. And it's terrible, such a horrible disease. There's really no help for them.

As they approach there sight... [there, should be their*]

And theyre down on their knees. [they're*]

The flow was a bit rocky.. but I loved the story told. Even though this is a cliche subject.. you penned it very well & not like most bullimic poems I've read.

Very nice.

Nicely done. You told a story about fat foods and how bullimic people think about it. Well done! I personally didn't find any mistakes within the poem The flow seemed a little shaky but other than that it was very good. God Bless 5/5
<3Tayy

And theyre down on their knees.
^ * you're.

They want to stay away
But they had a bad day...
^ Those two lines, they rhymed. The rest of the poem didn't. It threw the flow off a bit.

Other than those two things this was a great poem.
I loved how you went about writing the poem. Without making it sound too cliche, or making it unbearable. Some people will go into more detail making the poem gory. You didn't which I absolutely loved. :]
The flow was pretty good, along with the way it was set up.

Great Job.
Keep it up. :]