For our Love (short)

by Crystal Gaze   Apr 8, 2007


Hand in Hand we walk.
Our heart's beating as one.
Our souls entwined,
Just like our fate's combined.
Through the worst of storms we travel.
Across the wildest sea's we swim.
Through labyrinths of sharp rocks, we come through.
All to find our love will win

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    To be honest I don't like short poems :| BUT this one is beautiful, straight to the point. Flow was smooth, well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Aw, this was beautiful. Great flow and depth. I liked the some you vocab here as well. Wonderful read. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Awesome poem. I loved it. Another 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This reminded sooooooooooo much of me and my bf i love him so much but people always say bad things about me which arnt true. I have had a bad background but have come through thanx to my bofriend. this poem is really good

    welldone

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    So short so full of emtion. Excellent write. Good flow, well pinned nice choice of words.
    well done, keep up the good work. 5/5

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