Nice job on this one just a little work on the flow

-Specialist Shadowe

Very well written, great job, i like your style, short and to the point not alot of added words, nessa

Very nice, short, yet powerful. 5/5 and keep up the good work.

"Our [heart's] beating as one.
Across the wildest [sea's] we swim." = omit the apostrophes in order to make the lines grammatically correct.

"Through labyrinths of sharp rocks, we come through." = This line is beautifully penned. I liked the fact how your "love" endures such tribulations and turmoils in the road of life. I also love how you ended this piece by its sweet, concluding line. A concept of true love is applied here, I surmise.
Overall, 'twas a cute poem. A joy to read. Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
-Marian

I envy the writing skill reflected in this free verse poem that flows beautifully

Aww..That's so sweet! ^_^ kudos

So short so full of emtion. Excellent write. Good flow, well pinned nice choice of words.
well done, keep up the good work. 5/5

This reminded sooooooooooo much of me and my bf i love him so much but people always say bad things about me which arnt true. I have had a bad background but have come through thanx to my bofriend. this poem is really good

welldone

xxx alex xxx

Awesome poem. I loved it. Another 5/5

Aw, this was beautiful. Great flow and depth. I liked the some you vocab here as well. Wonderful read. 5/5

marcella

To be honest I don't like short poems :| BUT this one is beautiful, straight to the point. Flow was smooth, well done.