I liked this poem it portrayed a great meaning throughout it. The one thing i thought was that this line here:

Just a failed production of the re-productive system.

Seemed to long it kinda cut the flow of just on that one. Other then that a great poem well done ~mel

Wow, this was really good. I loved the fourth stanza.
"Hate me for who I am.
Love me for what I am not.
Plays on repeat.
While the torture carries on."

It had so much emotion, great job!!

Alissa

Wow VERY well done. You choose a topic that everyone can relate to. A very powerful read. You pulled the reader in from your first couple sentances, with the unique rhyming. I personaly loved it. I wish to read more from you 5/5

Such a sad but a great peice of poetry. Keep up the wonderful work. I really like the choice of title you choose. Wonderful. God Bless 5/5
<3Tayy

Wow, This pulls the reader into the poem to feel how that person feels. Its a really well written piece. 5/5 Well Done.

..X..Jo..X..

Wow! This poem is not only great for your funky structure, but it's so true to life. So many people struggle with this situation! Great job!

Absolutely beautiful poem, very unique and well written. I especially loved the line "Just a failed production of the re-productive system"...I could see that being my myspace quote...of course i would never take it LOL! oh and what does cachinations mean?

~jas~

Loves it =]]

This is a great poem. It had a lot of emotion put into it. It flowed wonderfully. A great penned piece. 5/5

Kalee

Wow...this poem was great. It read nicely and had a great flow to it. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Great vocabulary and a good metaphorical references. The readers can relate.

{5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

Wow wow wow totally amazing glad you put it in your favorites or i would have missed this great poem... ha ur going in my favorite poets right noww amazing job

~britt aka mountaindew