Story

by Alissa   Apr 9, 2007


-Story
I was inspired to write when I saw a picture of a book, ripped and torn. My thoughts started spinning, could it of been a love story? If so, was all the pain worth it? This is my poem, called "Story" my view of the love story.

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Tangled in the words so soft,
lightly whispered passion.
touched in the ink-filled thoughts,
with a love-made fashion.

Creases fold in time of greed,
making one forever mark.
Fighting dies with darkened blurs,
and shortens the fiery spark.

Rips of anger put pain on thee,
and tears make the river.
raining words seem to block,
what the heart can deliver.

Words fall to a story,
to set the living free.
But hatred falls upon the letters,
and creates a stormy sea.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bre Monique

    Wow! You're only 14? This was really good. I loved the lines "lightly whispered passion...
    touched in the ink-filled thoughts..."

    Your words are really strong and I loved the way you used them. Nice job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Excellent poem...i love the word choice and the rhyming was perfect....

    "Tangled in the words so soft,
    lightly whispered passion.
    touched in the ink-filled thoughts,
    with a love-made fashion."

    this is my favorite stanza.

    great job!5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Fascinating.
    This peice was very enjoyable.
    The flow was beautiful and the ryhmes Flawless.
    You really capture the mystery.
    Keep it up.
    Elaine.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Marie

    I really enjoy your word use, the idea is extremely unique, that pulled me in. I like that you could take the idea of a tattered book and make it so visible and enticing to the reader.

    Genius

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Hrm, this is rather good. I like how you got the idea to write this poem. Very creative indeed if I do say so myself. The flow and rhyme pattern was good, I liked your word usage made a lot of sense you did really good on writing this poem.

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