The Saddest Moment Of My Life (Acrostic)

by Hatori   Apr 9, 2007


As you walked away,
Bearing no love for me,
Could it be,
Does life have no meaning for me?
Every time we were together,
For each moment of my life,
Good never befell you and I.
Hate is something I could never do,
I love you far too much.
Just please, I ask,
Keep loving me back!
Love is a confusing thing,
Many people fear it.
No matter the cost,
Or the horror I must pay,
Please don't walk away.
Quietly you turned to me,
Reading the meaning in my face,
Smiling that sincere smile of yours.
Taking a step forward, You touched my face,
Utter the sentences that crushed my life.
"Veer your heart away from me, and don't let your soul,
Wither away. I do not love you."
Xylophones played a sad tune as he left,
Yes, he walked away that sad, depressing night.
Zero is the amount of times I ever felt happiness again.

*This is an acrostic poem of the alphabet*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh wow O_O a very unique Acrostic poem :) just like the others said from above X is a hard letter..

    Anyway It flowed nicely.

    My favorite line would be..
    Keep loving me back!
    ^^ I love the emotions in it ;)

    Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Awww. soo sweet and yet sad.. I loved the smotions that I felt from this poem.. I really hope you stop writing.. becasue I will be happy to read more of your poems.... very good.. keep up the good work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I'm in the process of trying to write one of these.
    It isn't working.
    But I love the idea alot.

    I loved how you used the "x" which is really hard to place in a sentence.

    [[Xylophones played a sad tune as he left,]]

    Well done. :]

    "

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Thanks for the message! I humbly accept your friendship! You have terrific poems yourself! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Yuna

    I think it is very hard to write a poem according to the alphabet AND have it sound and look good. I think you did super with this poem and I am very impressed! Great job!

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