Hey,
First of lal thank you for your comment on my poem. Now ill start your comment by the title of the poem, it straight away got my attention and i was wondering what is this about? So yeah your title defo caught the readers attention and that was excellent! Anyways, now your poem, i loved your vocabulary usage, it shows real talent and shows off your excellent english. Lol. It had a good flow and overall it was a good read. I htought to improve i suggest you use a more varity of punctuation. Keep using this vocabulary! Keep it up! xx

You used very strong...big words on this poem. Lol. Still very well done! God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

Wow!!! GREAT JOB.. You used words you don't usually see in poetry and you worded everything perfecly...It is kind of short but that doesn't affect the poem at all....and it usually does...5/5... And thanks for your comments as well..
~ Tyanna ~

Its a short poem! but its really good! I like your style :) keep up the good work!

Hmmmmmmmm, your topics are so unique.. it makes readers to want to read it over and over... great job

Good vocabulary
but it seemed like you were more focused on the vocabulary than anything else
it was good but I'd say a 4/5

Good vocabulary and nice idea but if you go into more detail about your topic, then it would much more improved. Haha. Words. BIG. lol your poem was really short though. I wish it had been longer. 4/5

Wow this is very original. ive never seen anything like it. pretty good flow. u used some very big words lol. great job. keep up the great writing!

I love the title.. very interesting.. as for the poem BIG VOCABULARY... i had to look up like some of the words ... lol... but you did a great job with the flow and poem itself.. to be able to add such good vocabulary and still keep the flow smooth.. your did wonderfully

This was really creative! I liked it, and I think it was the title that got me wondering. I do thing that...
you have made it on to my favorites :]

Wow, lol wyou used some real strong vocab there, i kind of only understand some parts of it, but i could i liked lol :D

xxx alex xxx

This is a very.. interesting poem. I love the use of new and unusual vocabulary, it made the poem very interesting, and got me thinking. I love the title you chose for your poem, too. Great work.

Very original!
I really liked this poem!
I think you did a good job describing the words and thx for putting what that word meant on the bottom because I wouldn't have had a clue...So great poem
5/5

Oh, damn.

[Is rendered speechless on a comment for the first time ever.]
+Favorite Poems.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

This was interesting but in a good way. keep up the nice work. you have a gift use it to your advantage. 5/5 nice work once more.

Yet again unique topic with great vocab. I found this poem to be complex also and the way you describe things are so very vivid and creative. The flow was great and smoothed out so really well. Loved it~mel

Cant = can't

Interesting poem. First of all, Capital I's are reccommended and I suggest you recheck your grammar, but overall the meaning most likely could be debated. It is tough to create an image of what the scene this poem tries to create in the reader's head... mostly because I, and I am sure other people as well, stumble slightly (some more than others) on the larger words... And sometimes it takes away from the meaning and the vivaciousness of your poems. I suggest you write some poems without large words, but kind of keep it a little simple..... I think this outdoes Emily Dic kinson lol.

Still, very well written poem

5/5
~Stephen White

I am not totally positive what it means but maybe you will explain? Loved it (even though I'm ignorant to the "underlying meaning") Great work. You are truly truly talented.

You have an amazing style that really stands out.

Very origanal title, very new subject. i loved it really. at first read i was very unsure ofif i would like it. but after going back and reading it aloud i found it simply amazing. 5/5