I will ...but would you

by zak   Apr 11, 2007


Ill be here for you whenever you need me
but will you be here for me when i need you
ill cheer you up when your down
but will you cheer me up when I'm down
ill fight for you forever
but will you fight for me
ill defend you no matter what happens
but will you defend me no matter what
ill look after you and care for you till the day i die
but will you look after me and take care of me till the day i die
ill love you forever with my heart until the end
but will you love me with all your heart forever tuntil the very end

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  • 16 years ago

    by zak

    Ahah thanks marina ive stopped for a while since i havent found the time but hopefully i will start agains =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Marina

    Had to re-comment.. this is really really good. i like the flow and the emotion 5/5 well done. DON'T STOP WRITEING!
    ~Marina

  • 16 years ago

    by behindxthextears

    Aw i like this poem cuz its so true... you never know if sumbody would do all that back for you .. its great :)

  • 17 years ago

    by zak

    =D thansk you very much for the comment =d

  • 17 years ago

    by Marina

    Very nice.. 4/5... good expresive words... good flow... i like it a lot... nicely done
    -Marina.

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