by jessica Apr 11, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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As i sit here with my razor blade |
by Devon
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I like the rythnm! keep up the good work. |
by Domino0792
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Hey, just first of all ... great poem and writting. You need to watch your stanza punctuation but great otherwise... I could really feel the emotion hidden in every lingering word ... |
by Domino0792
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Hey, hows it going? I really loved this poem, it had depth and emotion which made me really enjoy it! Well penned, keep the great writting up! 5/5 |
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This is sad but i know how you feel gurl.... |