You killed my heart

by Tracy D Rollings   Apr 12, 2007


Lies ,heartaches, pain and broken trust
how i can go on when all we do is fuss
Tell me you won't, but do it any way
said you love me, and now you
want me to forgive you, I'm confused
my mind is cluttered, can't think
i need a drink, to ease the pain
till you leave me, my heart can't break
for no love does it have, you killed it
and left it full of holes, from the sweet tales
you drove in it like nails, don't leave angry
do us both a favor and just go, take your trouble with you
i got my own, i hate this life but I'll make it alone.©2007 Tracydr42

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Ending is very effective, you sound really angry and you described pain greatly, emotions are also expressed on a fantastic way. Short but powerful, it deserves 5/5
    Well done, keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Skulblaka Sverda

    ~from the sweet tales
    you drove in it like nails~
    I like the wording you used here......