Endless pit

by BlAcK RoSe   Apr 12, 2007


I try and be happy for everyone.
For Years i have had a fake smile on my face.
The truth is that i am dying inside.
I am sick of being the person everyone wants me to be.
Why am i never good enough.

The dark cloud is over me it has been for years.
Sometimes i feel so down.
The tears i cry are not enough no more.
I just feel numb.
I want to be loved for me.
I feel like i am in a crowded room and i am still the lonest person in there.

No one understands what i am going through.
It makes me laugh when people say they do.
How can they know what i am going through.
I have tryed to take my life once.
But it failed.
Now i am thankful that my life did not end.
But i am still down in the endless pit of depression.
I dont wanna die but i am sick of living.
I just stay here.

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  • 17 years ago

    by April McLaren

    I can defenantly relate and are you my twin

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    "endless pit of depression" oh it does happen. very good poem, although this isn't really something negative I just have to point it out. its "dying" not "dieing" (sorry it just made me cringe because I'm a spelling freak). Anyways excellent job, I enjoyed this a lot! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by James

    Very good i can relate to that thxs for the nice comment :)

  • 17 years ago

    by June

    I understand what your going through ,this one brought a tear to my eye cos in some ways what your feeling mirrors what i feel.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Nice poem, but i don't think the flow was good enough though, but good work an thanks for commenting on my poem.

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