Vampire's Kiss

by Wallace   Apr 12, 2007


For a vampire's kiss is all it takes
To turn you into one too
But if you be on the watch and be prepared
They'll never be able to catch you

But unfortunately for my little girl Jane
She trusted her boyfriend to take her home
But unaware of his evil plans
She was unprepared and all alone

Just a mile from her home
He stops the car and she immediately asks why?
But then he asks the strangest thing
"Honey, do you want to die?"

Her heart stops, her hands shake
And then she says, "no"
"Well let me take you on a ride,
There's somewhere I need to go."

He starts the car and drives away
To the dark side of town
She takes out her pepper spray
But immediately he pins her down

He stops at an abandoned church
"Let me show you where I live"
Then he ties and bounds her to the floor
"There is something you have to give"

Her body shivers and her eyes seize
But then he wipes his lips
And now she definitely knows
She has to give him a kiss

He jumps with excitement
Then he bursts out with laughter
And then strangely he stops and says
"Now my darling you're going to be a vampire!"

For a vampire's kiss is all it takes
To turn you into one too
But if you be on the watch and be prepared
They'll never be able to catch you

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    The imagery in this poem is good and very vivid, and the story behind it is very interesting. My favorite stanza is:
    -Her body shivers and her eyes seize
    But then he wipes his lips
    And now she definitely knows
    She has to give him a kiss-
    The flow is a little off in some parts, but that doesn't ruin the whole impression very much.

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    Good poem yep 2nd place in erotic contest

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    Is this the poem u wrote for my erotic contest if so u need to post it in the contest cause I am wanting to do judgeing soon on that contest. good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Oh well done. i loved the topic you talked bout. it was so unique.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Lovely little dark poem, it really has a great rhythm without tripping over itself
    5/5
    *Gem*

    (P.S. Sugar and Spice was 'supposed' to be childish.. hence being under the humour catagory.. O_o)