Blizzard in my head

by Hebe   Apr 12, 2007


There's a blizzard in my head
No thought is crossing my mind
I just stare, to see nothing
A moment of clearness
Thoughts are flowing like a river
I concentrate on one thing
Now it's only you I'm thinking of
I see you in my mind's eye
And wish you were here sitting next to me
While we're watching through the window
Looking at the blizzard outside

08-02-07

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kim

    Heya.
    I like this poem.
    Don't know what else to say, except:

    Keep up the great work! ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem , well written and you expressed it very nice, wording was good, love the way you described everything in your mind, you have a wonderful imagination, keep it up, your friend Tracy d......5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    A wonderfuL poeM oF lovE... GOOD expressionS werE sO deeP..

  • 16 years ago

    by Milton

    I thought it was nice. I sometimes feel like this too. good stuff

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    The beginning portion gave me a thought of a person engrossed in daydreaming. Later then, it tells us about another nameless person which perhaps have a huge influence to the former - be it a loved one, then. But, in any case, I quite liked this piece. Nicely penned, dear.

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