See me , see me not

by Sab   Apr 13, 2007


Here i am
watching your every step
you don't know me
but i sure know you and your almost on your way to death

i see your hands shiver
when you read one of my mystery letters
i can see you fright in your eyes
i even saw you arming your self with daggers

you should now that you've been bad
SO it's my job to punish you , once and for all!
don't cry , don't scream , don't even dare to breath
SO you would imagine your great big painful fall

don't worry it will only lasts you a second
and you will see the hot flame burns through your soul!
and you taught that this was just a legend
no lets stop the talking and get on with the stalking

please comment it and tell me what do you think (rate it as well please) thanks

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    I liked this a lot. It captured my interest.
    The Angel of Secrets

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    I liked this poem because it was quite descriptive. The one piece of advice I will give is trying to evenly lengthen out the lines in the poem because it gives it more flow :]
    But I really loved the title that definetly drew me in.

    Take Care,
    Bonnie