What's witht the kiss

by tears i cry   Apr 13, 2007


As I lift the blade to my wrist
I wonder why I loved you
I wonder what’s with the kiss
Did you really mean it
Did you really care
Was it really affection was it really there
Life can be hard at times
Life can be full of pain
But in the end really what is there to gain
Now the warm blood spills from the slit
Just answer me one more question
What’s with the kiss

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  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    Hmm really relatable n really great flow!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    It is very interesting. It isn't the best poem that I read but still it is good. Short and simple but still very powerful. You created great atmosphere.

  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    This poem deserves more than 5 in my opinion

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Aww, that'S a sweetTpoeM! I likE iT :)

    luzaN

  • 17 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    Wow, I really like this! Short but made a point. Really strong. 5/5. If you ever get a chance, please check out and comment on some of mine. Thx.