Comments : My First Day at School

  • 16 years ago

    by XfaithXtrustXloveX

    Omg that was great!lmao God I love the last part it was great keep up the work!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Haha wow.. mean but still very clever and well written... nice job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

  • 16 years ago

    by gorgeous girl

    Wow that was some wicked writing... very nicely writen. I would never imagine someone hating there mother..

  • 16 years ago

    by LiNa

    Great poem and the first day of school is a pain in the butt

  • 16 years ago

    by country girl

    Ya, um w/e

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    LMAO!!!!!!!! haha that was hilarious..whew.. lol still laughing...

    damn that was funny...gosh i dont know why im laughing so hard...ok.im done..

    *clears throat* that was a good write and very enjoyable..loved it.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    You put a smile on my face with this one. what a great poem.
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Lol cute poem. The twist at the end was interesting. I did enjoy this poem alot it was quite interesting and I didn't bore what so ever like I usually do reading alot of funny poems. You did a great job. Keep it up.. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Oh that was so good! It was really funny...ecspecially with it being your mom at the end! Loved that! Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Ohh! this one is really good and rhymes are amazing! you have some real talent! i loved this one!! keep up the great work! :o]

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    HAHAHA

    I certainly didn't see that ending coming, that made me crack up in giggles.

    I enjoyed this, I've often tried to write humouress poems and found it difficult, so I think you did a wonderful job with this.

    The only suggestion I would have for this is to try and fix this stanza up a little:

    "Her homework was hard
    She gave us long division
    And then multiplication
    And then subtraction"

    I found it didn't rhyme as well as the rest of the piece did.

  • 16 years ago

    by I love you always and today

    LOL that made me tear cause it's soo funny I loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by Confined

    Jokes poem =P i had a teach like dat once lol

  • 15 years ago

    by DeepLife

    That so freakin funny!!!!
    ROTF-LMFAO!!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by CHANGED

    Lol good one