No Pain, No Gain

by Romancing the Darker Side   Apr 15, 2007


Turmoil fizzles over
A razor and wrist unite
No pain, no gain
Is her motto here tonight

Anguish sizzles to a defect
Bloody slices scream
Nights fade away
Into slightly softened dreams

Hatred comes out quickly
A look of anger on her face
Floor and body meet together
In a sinful and deadly race

Turmoil fizzles over
A razor and wrist unite
No pain, no gain
Is her motto here tonight

The parents find her body
Cold and lifeless as her tool
As death embraces her soul
She breaks every rule

In heaven she is rejected
Only sentenced to Hell
The secrets she kept in for so long?
Don't worry, it's time to tell

Her entrance only showered
With black flames and knifes
This is her home now
She takes many a proud stride

Regret sets in
A soul and Satan unite
No pain, no gain
Is his motto here tonight

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  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Pretty bloody love.
    yet i quite adored it.
    very well penned.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Wow, really intense and detailed poem!
    Great write! The flow was flawless.
    The rhythem of the poem was great.
    Keep it up! God Bless 5/5
    <3Tayyy

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow. This was an amazing poem. It was so intense and powerful. The flow was good most of the time, the rhymes worked and the descriptions were excellent. I love the detail and metaphors you put into it. Wonderful job hun. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Ok i really liked this poem i think you word choice has stepped up from some of your older poems which is really great. I loved the repetition it was great! and this story was good for a cutting poem seeing as people are saying they are getting sick of reading them me though i never do. Really interesting. Well done ~mel

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