Spend your time on what really matters...

by CHOKE   Apr 15, 2007


You lived your life sleeping for way too long,
Wake up; drop your razor blades and come along.
Stop living in the shadows; live your life for real.
Don't do this to yourself; just make a deal.

Promise to change your ways; change everything you are.
Drop the knives and hop in a car...
Go somewhere and start anew.
Be a better you.

Stop dreaming; wake up to reality.
Take a whiff; just breathe...
Live your life; no longer should you sleep.
Step away from those shadows that will always creep.

Step away from the noose.
Stop drowning out the pain with all those pills and all the booze.
Spend your time on what really matters.
Pick up the pieces of your life; every fallen piece left scattered...

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  • 17 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    How do i join the clubs? im not really super new to this but im not in ne clubs

  • 17 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    Wow...i love it ...absolutely amazing...thanks for the comment on my poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Excellent!!
    It really flowed well. Everyone should read this, very inspirational. Keep it up!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Good poem, but you use "..." symbols a little too much in your writing. try to work on that.

  • 17 years ago

    by Anne Garcia

    *smiles* just like what your poem said! thank you... i'll do my best. i am happy for you as well.... *looks at time* it is pretty late here.... let's talk again tomorrow or whenever alright!? goodnight! oh yeah it was lovely meeting you. =)