by myshiningstar14 Apr 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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A walk so bold the |
by Weeping Wolf
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Great,great job! this poem had both elegance and spice, from the angelic images to the sexy descriptions of this boy you love, it really shows how you feel about him, i sure hope you let him read all these, there great! |
by Milton
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I dunno how you got to be so good at writing feelings down but you did. heh. really nice poem. good stuff. |
by Corinne
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Very good. There were a few word choices that you "might" want to reconsider. I'm going to be very picky - Feel free to ignore me ;-) |
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Brighter than the moonlight |