Unloving Pleasure

by JustBeingDevine   Apr 16, 2007


The coldness of the night air
Makes me wonder if I am exposed to the
Echo of darkness screaming in my soul
Sends shivers down my spine.
The loneliness that consumes my dark skies
Unloving pleasure is all I know, black blanket of lust
Sinful winds smearing tears of shame
Smothering fury in my head
What I thought to be true
Had all been a lie
No one has loved me
Consumed by my every breath
As if I were the air in the sky

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Don't ever change your writing style, keep it short and good as usual. You have lovely poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonesomeme

    The imagery in this poem just blows my mind! Especially:
    Echo of darkness screaming in my soul
    Sends shivers down my spine.
    The loneliness that consumes my dark skies
    Unloving pleasure is all I know, black blanket of lust
    Sinful winds smearing tears of shame

    Great JOB Jenn! 5/5 keep up the good work. -Unattractive1

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