Love your poem, amazed with how its short ad you still kept it vividly detailed and effective! Great job 5/5

Awww cute!! I love this and wish stuff like this could actualy happen to me once in awhile lol but nice poem great job

This was short but really sweet and cute. i liked it alot. Well done on such a cute lil piece of poetry.~mel

Short sweet and to the point. I liked that is why I gave it 4/5 when I read it yesterday i think. I just didn't have time to comment on it then. Good job, and thanks for sharing.

This shoudl be a love poem. it was so beautiful and full of love and magic.

5/5 david

This poem is so sweet!!!
ok.
im soooooooo adding you to my favorites!!!

This poem was very interesting, I'm amazed by how much it say, but it's sort short, it takes talent to be able to that :) amazing job :)

Great poem no matter how short it is. 5/5

I think this is one of my favorites.
But I like all of ur poems. :)

Short but good you write a pretty good poem 5/5 Steve

Awesome job i wish it was a straight 5/5 but even my vote cant bring it up?

Yessss!!!! This is 100% unique. The cohesion is there though it is of 7 lines. Very impressive piece with sheer simplicity. Great work 5/5 for sure :)

With love
fsams

Very nice poem!! :-) 5/5!