Aww.. this is sweet.. i love your style.. all of your poems so far are so simple but still you get all your messages across strong.. this poem was no different.. my only suggestion is that i think you could've spent more time describing the fun moments you've had or how much your friendship means to you rather than how your friend looks :D
makes me have one to.
Because you smile,
I smile with you."
this I would have to say is my favorite stanza. The flow was flawless. The emtion was strong
and the imergery was vividly real. Good job.