Hard to Explain

by Tracy D Rollings   Apr 18, 2007


It's hard to explain the pain that i feel
but i really needed you to know.

This pain i have will never heal
but i promise to love you till i go.

Ill spend my days and nights with you
and we'll share all the things you wanted to do.

I can't stand the thought of you being alone
to live your life, when i am gone.

So when i get to heaven I'll make a special request
and ask God to please help you do your best.

So please remember that my love is true
and cherish the memories that i made with you.©2007 Tracydr42

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  • 18 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Aww Tracy.

    I really liked this poem because I can relate along with it. You have my email and we do talk often so if you need anyone to listen to you I'm there for you. Don't forget that!

    -Summer

    (btw your on my favorites now)

  • 18 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Tracy,
    I didn't think of this as sad. I thought it was more passionate in explaining that our days are all numbered and that you have a special request that the Lord will grant that he watch over your loved one. This was a beautiful testament of the undying love and need to take care of someone in the inevitable light of death.
    Your Friend,
    Kay

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Tracy
    Very sad yet beautiful. It is hard to live with memories. I am glad I have mine. Losing your true love is so much more painful than any physical pain I have gone through.

    so please remember that my love is true
    and cherish the memories that i made with you

    Loved these lines.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Riffy

    Thank you for your comment, much appreciated.
    This poem is great, it carries a lot of sad emotion but has a sense of hope and serenity to it too.
    Well done
    xxx.

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