This is what it sounds like when doves cry

by David johnson   Apr 18, 2007


People walking round blind
they wont make up they're own mind

never thinking for themselves
like Santa's little elves

believing all the media
cant they open they're own encyclopedia

caught up in the "real world"
all this bullshit got they mind swirled

believing what they're told
and all the bullshit they're being sold
the propaganda sculpt them into it's own mold
not once will they be bold

and make they're own decisions
follow they're own visions

people being mislead
and believing it is they're mind dead?

why don't they open up they're eyes
break all the ties that binds
there not as tight as you might find

God gave you freewill
do you possess it still

the mainstream media
does it define your criterea?

all this group think
no more self think

the thumb stands alone
the fingers climg together
are you an independent thinker?
or just another finger?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Very noticible forced lines. the two line rhyme scheme is nice though. i love the words you have chosen to use.structure is good. just try andlet it all flow. nice one. ibe

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa

    It is a very good poem. all true too. You did a good job. good flow, keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by LittleWolf

    The poem on itself isn't bad, but it would only be better if you'd leave more blank space, say things in groups. This is quiet hard to read without getting lost in the form of writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Lol I found the last line pretty funny, anyways this poem is sssooo true, and I hate it when people buy something that looks awful cuz of fashion or whatever. Anyways great job on this poem!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Lol I like the last lines but yea very very good poem its also very true media telling us whats hot or not ya know and the sad thing is they believe it. anyways great jog i really liked it. <3

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