Does He

by BrokenREALiTy   Apr 19, 2007


I find myself wondering,
Does he still think of me?
Does he ever stop to look,
At a past memory?

Am I the only one,
Roaming through the past?
Has he simply gotten,
Over us so fast?

Is it only I that keeps thinking,
Of what we could've been?
Or is he, too, questioning,
What was hiding deep within.

Does he sit around at night,
Unable to fall asleep?
Simply because he can't forget,
The day he made me weep?

Is his pillow stained with tears,
Or am I the only one that cried?
When we both went our ways,
Was my heart the only one that died?

Give an answer to my queries;
Does he ponder if we were real?
Is it truly over,
Or does he feel the way I feel?
[c] 2O07 Mindy Huang

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Great work...very well penned n it's sort of different but i liked it...very good choice of words..n i actually liked the way u'cve presented the matter in a unique n successful manner...Great job!

    5/5!!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Zeus

    Wow this poem is truly great. I loved the flow and the story behind it. It was really good. The vocabulary was nice too. Goob Job once again

  • 16 years ago

    by amoxi

    This isnt a love poem that i usually read and its nice to have a change another wonderful poem

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    To be honest I'm not sure... The whole "has he got over me too fast" situation seems pretty average and overused...I've heard it all before.
    Yes, poetically it wasn't a bad poem, but subject wise it was just like many other ones I've read before.
    Sorry, but I wasn't so keen on this one. Therefore, I cannot really give any suggestions or valid comments either way.
    Keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    To be honest I'm not sure... The whole "has he got over me too fast" situation seems pretty average and overused...I've heard it all before.
    Yes, poetically it wasn't a bad poem, but subject wise it was just like many other ones I've read before.
    Sorry, but I wasn't so keen on this one. Therefore, I cannot really give any suggestions or valid comments either way.
    Keep writing.

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