My Dad

by Kali   Apr 21, 2007


My dad is my hero
He knew me at zero!
Though I was adopted
He's always been there for me!

I know he's the best person in my life
He's a father who truly loves me!
I strive for what I want and he helps me too!
People don't like me for my religion but he's been there too!

If I were to know some1 as amazing as him
Its my big brother who's always there with him!
I love them both but there's one more person,
he's some1 I've trusted to keep my heart!
He's the one who put it together when it fell apart!

I won't say his name its not my thing!
But It starts with a J and he's in love with me (sadly)!
My dad is the person who means the most!
Even though I don't have a mom,
Were extremely close!

Love to all~ Kali

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  • 16 years ago

    by dawn green

    Very nice poem! keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Aside from the technical errors, I find this piece rather cute. I thoroughly can correlate with it because my father is my best friend. It is a nice read. I can only suggest that maybe applying a consistent line meter will enhance the flow? Anyway, I like this poem very much!

    all the best