Wow this is great! it's a different type of poem, which makes it even better! it had a nice flow to it! 5/5

~Kristina

I didnt find this poem to be weird it greatly portrayed emotion throughout it. Was different but nice to read.

Afraid to appear outside the closet
For she feels her feelings hopeless
Oh how hurtful the feeling to know
That her love is more than useless

That stanza was my favorite and definitly got my attention. Well done~mel

Wow i love this poem. So well written. Ýou have talent!! keep it up. xx Chrissie

The wording was eliminated and flow was good..you have a good imaginery really...keep up the good work
Take care
Laura

Wow, I loved this poem.. No words can describe the feeling it gives you. I think my favorite stanza was..
"It is true love this girl seeks
Yet it is hard love she disguises
Her life filled with twists and turns
Her life overflows with surprises"

Filled with twists and turns.. It caught my eye right off the bat, it was beautiful, keep up the good work, when I started reading it I thought it was kinda going to be slow, but it draws you into it, That is what a writer is supposed to do.And the flow was dead on as well as the rhyme. Good job. 5/5
Ally

5/5 excellent poem. i loved your rhymes and your use of words. beautiful. the whole poem was adictive and well structured. i loved it no matter the subject. :)

Afraid to appear outside the closet
For she feels her feelings hopeless
Oh how hurtful the feeling to know
That her love is more than useless
I think I love this part the best. You are talented. nicely written, good flow, an all in all good write 5/5

I feel this poem was very skillfully written. The revelations are shy and subtle while flowing flawlessly it seems to reveal true feeling.

Wow wonderful poem. this expresses love for some one out there and thats what matters. you are very good. full of emotion and feelings. keep up the good work 5/5.

Wow, great poem! You're talented :D

Yet her smiles are still picture perfect
Her looks are still innocent and pure
Her proper self, she hinders
This secret she will have to endure

This was a great stanza! I liked this part best :D 5/5 from me!

I don't know how you think this is weird, and you have some real talent. You kept it short and simple and, overall, it was very good. 5/5

Wonderful poem. I don't think that it is weird:) keep up the great work. 5/5

Omg this is sooo cool! i loved it best poem I've read all day ncie work flow and rhythm and everything was right on

I actually thought this was wonderfully written. 5/5 from me!

I loved the last stanza!! This poem was wonderfully written..I really liked it!! Another 5/5

Nice work. Beautifully set and I didn't find it weird at all. Keep it up. :)
cheers, josh

Your poem seemed strange to me at first, and i couldnt grasp it, but as i persevered and kept reading, i really liked it, it was well written and so powerful, i think it is one of the best ones i hav read as a love poem.. as u usually dont like to read this categorie... thanks for posting it, i really enjoyed reading it

This poem is...wow

this poem is amazing...it flows and moves so smoothly and the mysterious vib i felt when i read it

wow...i like this one

good job!!!!!
keep writing!
~shannon~

Stop downplaying your poems when you're done writing them.
Anyway, I liked this. The flow was good as was the use of vocabulary. I liked how you never came and said what was so imperfect or useless about the girl. A good mystery in a poem is hard to find. 5/5

Beautiful :) its not weird at all! well penned! good job! 5/5!