Duality

It's almost like lyrics for a song. The end was a little let down but really I thought it was cool. Except this line is something that kinda messes it up for me.
"Reaping What Ive so Patiently Sown"
It's too cliche to me. Otherwise sound write.
~Faith-less

Wow, the language in this was amazing. i loved the imagery and the beauty within the words. it was almost like a fairytale, i could see the pictures dancing in my head, i think this poem illustrates a deep talent.