Who i pretend to be

by Alicia M   Apr 23, 2007


Sitting again all alone
As I grieve and mourn
No one knows the pain inside
Because of the perfect image I place outside

Living in a lie
In a creative Disguise
Waiting for someone to notice me
That I am not really who I pretend to be

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brandon Dirck

    Wow this is really good

  • 16 years ago

    by miss insecurity

    Short but (to differ from the usual saying) deep

    sometimes too many words can only make an idea heavier and less powerful

    this was one of those cases :]

  • 16 years ago

    by felica

    I love this poem....it reminds me of what i use to do as well....GREAT JOB!

  • 16 years ago

    by ThatPerson

    Very good,but if your in that situation....
    If you want to shine like a star just be yourself

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    That was soo good!!... i loved it... 5/5 from me, and thanks for the comment!

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