Comments : Letter To You

  • 17 years ago

    by I Love You

    Wow what a great job on this poem you did writing it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    I dunno-I think its a little short...Sweet though. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Short and Sweet. I always love this perspective. Well done.
    The flow was a little choppy- but who knows I could have read it wrong.

    Well done.
    keep it up, and thanks for sharing.

    Elainex

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Short, sweet and too the point. I think the flow was a little choppy too, but it si still a good read. Keep up the good work. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Julienne

    Yeah it was short and sweet, but thats how i like it, i dont like reading poems that seem to have no end, and thats what i really enjoyed, it was well written and it seemed to fit in together really well, i am not sure as to how to improve it... really the only improvement is time, so yeah i would like to congratulate on an outstanding piece that really got through your message and did it without losing the point of the poem, so thank you for publishing such an esquisite piece!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Hmm just a little typo in the first line it should be "letter". This poem was a little choppy and jumpy, and in turn made it a little difficult to follow. The first verse was preaty good and showed why you were writing the letter however you seemed to lose emotion as the poem progressed. nice try though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Wow, great poem. I felt that way about someone once. This is a very good poem. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    "And nothing comes even close" < 'even comes close' would sound better.. It kinda confused me. I reread it a few times and it hit me! Loll.
    ----
    "This may not be much,
    Cause I can't say what I want to,
    But it's the best I can do.
    You mean so much to me,
    I'm glad you now know."
    ^ I believe that says it all, sweetie.
    ----
    Cute, sweet, short poem.
    i loved it, a lot.
    It was like one of those extremely romantic poems, you know. Because it means so much, even though it 'says' so little.
    <3 Good Job.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Wonderful poem. its so cute. even though it didnt rhym i think the flow went very well. the structure was also good. i think you did a great job. 5/5 keep up the great work.

    *~*MiSsUnDeRsToOd TeArS*~*

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww its so sweet! it flowed well! good job! well penned! straight to the point! :) 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by HollyNichole

    Thats good!! please read comment/ rate my new poem "cant stop"

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, i wish someone writes me something like that,
    very beautifuly written with great emotion......
    great job and you truly deserve a 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    You did a good job writing this. but 3/5 because it didnt flow too well and it kind of repeats the same thing the whole entire poem. but keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was a really cute poem, i dont usually like short poems like this but you did do a great job throughout this poem. Well done on a nicely written poem. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awww, cute and short.
    I really like these kind of poems.
    You tell them how you feel by
    simply saying you don't know how
    to. Keep it up! God bless 5/5
    <3Tay^_^ily

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    This was short simple and to the point, but also very sweet. nicely done. however, check your tenses. it doesnt work well in one point.

    and i know itsold, but i had the need to comment it.

    good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good
    i liked how you didn't rhyme
    because then i know how natural it was to you
    great job
    i loved it