Unprecedented Death

by Seronum   Apr 24, 2007


Settled under rock, the grave trembles with fear
Stretching far as the eye can see, theres no one here.
All the dust that blows 6 ft under with nothing to show.
Engraved death with blood in its eyes.
Failed by its leader, everything was lies.
This untimely daze is stuck in its ways,
justified by all mankind to know what its like
to be lost and alone under that rock you lay.

You are the fault,
The reason for despair.
You are the filth,
within the foul air.
You are the crud,
Beneath it all.
You are the mud
in which you fall.

But settled under the rock
Your grave it stands right here
Stretching far as the eye can see
Your actually buried here.
All the dust that blows your death nobody knows
Engraved is your image, A failure in itself
Grappled by all mankind with no one to help.
And to know what its like to be faced by death itself.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Another good poem ... i think you should write out the word six rather than typing the number... (just a little tip) also the rhyme crud and mud i didnt like too much.. besides that definitly my favorite so far... a lot of meaning and carefully thought through

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was diffrent. I loved it. I love your style so far. the flow again is excellent, and the story thing is always good in my opion. Keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Julienne

    You are very talented with your work, the words you write just seem to flow and paint a picture in my head and emotions in my heart... your flow, structure and message were all really well done and i applaud you!! congrats on an awesome poem....5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    I loved this one also.
    You really do have talent.

    'Engraved is your image, A failure in itself
    Grappled by all mankind with no one to help.'

    I loved it.

    Keep it up 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I liked the storyness out there in the poem..flow was fluidy and wording was eliminated
    I definetaly liked that
    Well done
    Laura

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