The world's going black

by nobody truly knows me   Apr 24, 2007


Standing in the rain
silently screaming
silently suffering
i stare off in the distance

seeing, but not seeing
losing grip on reality
entering my longed for fantasy
the world's going black

my mind's going numb
shadows are taking over my sight
my soul is leaving my body this night
inside i slowly die

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  • 15 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Wow. this is such a strong poem

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Hey...Beautiful Poem!Great Job!!.........loved it!...kp it up!
    Tk care.God bless!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by I Love You

    Wow this is wonderful. it flowed so nicely. what a great job you did on it 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Really good poem...
    nice flow and beautiful thoughts...
    keep on writing...

    *isabel*

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