Took the Jump

by xXAxTwistedxWishXx   Apr 25, 2007


As she stood so close to the sun
She looked down upon everyone
And as she stood on that high building top
She wondered how long it would take to drop
She saw everyone gathering below
As though it was all show
Why'd everyone care now
No one every did before
And as she stood there wondering how
She knew she need more
So she took the jump

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Nice poem.
    Very true.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Topic is interesting and this poem is very original. Very effective ending. This piece is short but still very powerful. I like the atmosphere that you created with just a few words. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Unreal

    Really Really Good
    I loved it
    but i hope you Feel Better
    <3

  • 17 years ago

    by becca

    Really emotional and deeply touching. your words are really strong and you structured it well. definately a beautiful, but truely moving and sad poem too. keep it up! xXx

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