It was a truly beautiful poem. Other than the fact that there was a few grammatical mistakes, It had a nice flow, and a good rhythm for a song. Good work.

Alesia

I thought it was lovely in my head it lost a few beats though just in a few spots. but thats it. i found it lovely and quite sooting to read.

I really like this. i know what that feels like.. i ask my self thoses questions everyday!.. anyway 5/5

Your format wasn't as fantastic as the last poem.
You should space out some words
I usually space it where the comma's
Supposed to be
For example
When I knew in the end,
nothing would end up the way I wanted them to
It's just a lot easier to read.
4/5

The only problem with this almost perfect poem is:
"When I knew in the end, nothing would end up the way I wanted them to,"
^ That line should be split into two different lines, so it doesn't throw off the flow of the poem.

Overall: good job. :D

Wow, that is pretty. I can really feel the emotions in your words, and it has a really good flow.
Good job. :]

Ah, the ever so classic"why?"
everyone asks it, but no one ever gets the answer.
i've found myself in that very same hole that you described, oh so many times.
good luck with life.

Wow, this was an amazing poem, with alot of emotion, keep it up dear...
i really can re late to this poem very much.
wonderful job
a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it

Very well written..self inquisition.. heheh... its a healthy thing to do.. but its a bittersweet poem.. u seem to love and hate the past all at the same time.. which makes this a really interesting poem...keep it up

I felt that there were a lot of questions in this poem. It really was missing something.

Wonderful poem. I like the repetativeness of it, it fits well with the message you are trying to convey. If you want, you could probably add on a little bit, there are still some questions I have about the poem.. But other than that it was great. 5/5 from me.