Watching the Sunrise

by Colby   Apr 25, 2007


Watching the sunrise
out the window
the door shutters
as the wind blows

Watching the sunrise
the door slams open
as death stairs you in the eye
taking away your last token

Watching the sunrise
walking to your death
you close your eyes
knowing this is your last breath,

Watching the sunrise
the air is harder to find
putting your head up looking
at the sunrise one last time.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    As mentioned in the earlier comment..i guess it shud b "Stares" intead of "stairs"...other wise it's very well penned...short n meaningful...i love such works..n not all tht good in writing short ones...u seem great in it...kp writing!
    Tk care!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xoOrdinaryGirlox

    I liked this, and i like how you can put a meaning into a shortish poem. Gd job.

    And in reply to your comment. I wasnt trying to rhyme. And thankyou for your advvice.

  • 17 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Great poem, short but full of meaning. I really like the deepness that seems to be behind the poem....GP

  • 17 years ago

    by Neme juste un jouet

    Second stnza, third line. "Stairs" should be "stares" other than that, great poem. i enjoyed the repetitive style.

    Aven