I'm Over You

by Brittany C   Apr 26, 2007


What do you want?
Just leave me alone.
I have nothing nice to say,
so go away before
someone gets hurt.

Pain, that is all I feel.
You left me for reasons
I just don't comperhand.
You said you had things
you had to work on.

What did you have to fix?
I must have missed it,
I didn't see anything that
needed to be worked on.
Then again maybe I was blind.

Now all I have are memories.
Also there is the dull pain,
that sometimes chills me to
the bone and shacks me to
the core of my heart.

But hey I'm almost over you.
At least I am getting somewhere.
Oh, come on baby don't look at
me like that. I am over you my
heart's just still in a little shock.

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  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I loved it, it was an awesome poem. you could really tell that you meant what you wrote, the wording was great. and it was just amazing. i added you to my faves, hope thats ok.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Hey I really liked the ending.. it was my favorite part. Sometimes what we see and what other people see are so very different and I liked how you wrote that last line. "Im over you but my heat's just still in shock" because that is exactally what it feels like to lose someone you know that its done yet you cant stop the hurt. nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hidden Feelings within these Words

    I enjoyed this poem, it kept my attention all through it, and the flow was pretty good. The poem was penned nicely though, nice work.
    -Ally

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    "comperhand" < comprehend.
    "shacks" < shakes.
    ^ Other countries and states spell things differently, I've noticed. So, if I'm wrong, mk. Lol. :/ Sorry, if so.

    You did an okay job with this poem, I think you've done better. And, the flow was a bit off. But, it was a good poem, overall.

  • 17 years ago

    by honeypot

    This was very nicely written.And I can relate to the meaning.
    Well done :-) x

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