The Break Up...

by XxMissCocainexX   Apr 27, 2007


So many tears have fallen
So many words have been left unsaid
I wish you would talk to me
So these thoughts wouldn't be going through my head

You mean the world to me babe
I'd give up everything for you
Please open up your eyes
And look past everything we are going through

This is just one big argument
Don't let it get in the way
I told you I love you
And I will till my dying day

You're the only one for me
My one and only true love
The angel god has sent
From the heavens up above

I never thought I'd find you
I thought love was just a lie
But now that I've let you in
Without you I would die

I don't care if you go to jail
I will be here through it all
Just promise me one thing
You won't let our love take a fall

This past week has been rough
And I'M SORRY for the way I've been
Please don't leave me babe
I just want things to be perfect again

I will do whatever it takes
So you won't turn to her
And these past few days
Have been nothing but a blur

I didn't mean all the nasty things i said
It was just all my emotions coming out as one
How else was I supposed to react
When you said the words "I'm Done"?

Maybe we moved too fast
So lets take things slow
Tell me what I need to do
So you will hold me and never let me go.

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  • 15 years ago

    by MELI

    WOOW YOU HAVE A LOT OF TALENT .. NOT ONLY DOES THIS RHYME (THATS REALLY HARD TO FIND NOW A DAYS) BUT IT EXPRESSES YOUR EMOTIONS IN A VERY DESCRIPTIVE WAY... GREAT POEM =] I LOVED IT

  • 15 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    Very deep and emotion-felt. breakups suck and u just proved it to anyone questioning that fact

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    OMG absoultly LOVE this! im going threw something kinda like that right now...oh i love it sooooooo much. im adding it 2 my favorites! great job! i love the words you used and it had a great flow! keep it up.
    if you wouldn't mind checking out some of my new ones that would be great! great job! 5/5

    BabyGurl

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel

    Hey great poem! really well written with a very lovely flow. emotions were clear, good describing words! good job!!
    p.s. i'd really love it if u'd check my poems out and rate/comment them. thanks alot!!