Guilty Realisation

by honeypot   Apr 28, 2007


Sing a song of sorrow
a life was lost in vain
sing a soothing melody
to ease a mothers pain

Dance a jig of happiness
a child is born at last
dance for brand new memories
to pacify the past

Whisper in the darkness
a secret best forgotten
whisper prayers with hollow eyes
to cleanse a soul thats rotten

Touch a hand of healing
a tender guilty pleasure
touch upon a feeling
that you will forever treasure

Cry a sea of tears
a letter in the post
cry with realisation
she was the one that loved you most.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    Ugh you are just sooo good at rhyming! I love your stuff. I'm going to add you to my favorites, cause your good. Check out my stuff if you have a chance.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Lovely poem. I really liked it:) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very Very good! I actually sung it to myself lol it sounded better well with the rhythm I was singing it to it sounded good the only part that stood out to me was this

    whisper prayers with hollow eyes
    to cleanse a soul thats rotten

    ^^ but otherwise good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Wonderful. I really loved this poem.
    Great inspirational life-life-while-
    you-got-it poem. Well done!
    God Bless 5/5
    <3Tay^__^ily

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    You write gorgeous poems. that's almost all i can say because it is perfectly true. this one is so calming and inspiring it is amazing. your poems flow perfectly, so beautifull penned. 5/5
    gabriella

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