Broken

by Nevi   Apr 29, 2007


I wake up each day to look in the sea
but who is that broken person staring back at me?
He looks so sad with pleading eyes
and i see his life is full of lies
I go to sleep
fell into the sea
and find the lonely boy is none other than me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by bacha

    It is sad one pal :(:(

    but i loved it
    keep up :):):)

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Wow. really powerful poem
    loved it 5/5
    it's sad but true how sometimes we don't see how messed up we truly are

  • 16 years ago

    by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life

    Aww baby this is really sad poem...i love you and i hope that i can heal those wounds that this life has left you with.. you are my ANGEL..and w/o you i don't know what i'll do.
    -*Evan's lil*fairy*-

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