Breathe

by Nevi   Apr 29, 2007


I've lost my breath i feel you here
the final person that i hold dear
you're close to me i need you now
you make me happy, i don't know how
You're fading out a shimmer dim
"please come back" is my hearts whim
I cant feel you, breathe into me
i need your light for me to see
i cant feel you here you've gone away
but in my heart you'll always stay.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    Nice poem ... good job

  • 16 years ago

    by bacha

    Goood poem pal:):):)

    i will give ya 5/5

    so keep up:):):)

  • 16 years ago

    by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life

    This poems its short yet it says so much. i love you babe you did good with this poem. i feel your pain hunny. keep up the good work. i will always love you, never forget that.
    -*Evan's lil*fairy*-

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Good poem, very nicely written
    i feel it,
    keep it up
    a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it.

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