Unfinished

by jazmazollicoffer   Apr 30, 2007


Love is an emotion, love is also hurt and pain;
love is not a person it has no face or name.
It can sometimes make you smile and other times make you cry.
Love is not a drug; people who say otherwise are such a lie.
We often take love for granted but love is something that can never make you feel rejected.
Saying you are in love are only words without actions. Doing things to show you love someone is pure satisfaction.
The word love sometimes is used loosely; people don't know the meaning so often they misuse it.
Sometimes it can make your heart smile, but often lust put us in a state of denial.

not finished yet but tell me what you think

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  • 16 years ago

    by TheLoveMeGirl

    It's really good so far...just be careful how you end it, if you have a bad ending it just won't be near as good, it'll damage the poem...weird thing to say, right? damaging a poem... :P Relaly love it so far though!

  • 16 years ago

    by StephanieH

    Wow, i actually REALLY love thiss great job, =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was quite pleasurable to read, although it was an unfinished product. I generally agree with your statements which were nearly all alleged facts. Apparently, lust is the distortion of love. I'd like to see that concept to progress in your piece. :) Nicely done, nonetheless.

    Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by anna

    Wow. It appears that you have an unusual outlook on love. It's very unique. I really like it and I look forward to reading the finished project.

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Yer i thought about my baby when i read this and it made me think about how i take him for granted. All i think you should do is seperate into stanzas yup thats it and i doesnt need and end it fine as it is :D

    please read 'The bodys' rain' thanx :D

    xxx alex xxx

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