I Hate the Snow (Colder)

by Romancing the Darker Side   May 1, 2007


I hate the snow
It makes you colder
It's nights like these
When I remember:
Everything you've done
Is not just a thing of the past

So you thought
Just by leaving
You could make
Me understand?
Well when you're around
The flakes start to fall

And you thought
Just by deceiving
You could make
Everything right?
Well when you're gone
It's sunny in my mind

You believed
Just by crying
I'd show
Some sympathy?
Well when you're dead
I'll have summer all year round

I hate the snow
It makes you colder
It's nights like these
When I remember:
Everything you've done
Is not just a thing of the past

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  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I think the repititon of the first stanza as the last gave this a circular, dealt with feel. it seemed resolved. the imagery throughout was amazing and the use of snow was really clever.

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was a good poem nice job, i could feel your voice in it. I like the cold though. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    This 1 is like very cold...well penned..though i found a few grammar mistakes u've written well...Good work!..kp it up!
    Tk care!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Aww. So sad, but very well peened.
    I found a couple of errors, and the
    flow was a bit shaky. Very well done
    though. God Bless 5/5
    <3Tay ^__^

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