DREAMS ARE NOT REAL (acrostic)

by ECILA ice   May 2, 2007


Days of glee is now over
Radiant light had vanished
Eminent time became colder
And what left for me is anguish;
Many days I walk in bewilderedness
Solitarily counting the days that passed

And each day I dwell to this loneliness
Reminds me of great moments that turned to dust;
Everything now is just an illusion

Never I had imagine it will end up this way
Over the months that you gave me new directions
Turn nil, everything suddenly fade away

Rueful hours is where I stand today,
Exhausted thinking on how to start and how to deal;
After building a fantasy that had been drifted away
Lies are all you made, leaving me to a dream that isn’t
real

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  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    I liked it. I think it was a good aristocrat. the only thing is to check ur grammer thats all i saw. Im gonna give it a 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    This one is a bit better. i liked the flow, the point of the acrostic was said but it wasn't proven, but over all nicely done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    Tis a beautiful poem, and acrostics are one of my favorite styles, and you did excellent, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!! p.s. cool name, lol.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Dreams r not real, thats ur view n its surely proved in ur poem. This is a nice poem with good rhyming stanzas. Good work :-)

    plx read 'English for the confused'

    With love
    Fsams