Im 17 your 16

by josh mills   May 3, 2007


I love you so much
i cant seem to forget your touch
i think i love you a little much
i think we need to take a little break
but i don't want our love to turn to hate
your too young I'm too old
or so i am told
maybe I'm being to bold
but I'm a little to young and your a little to old

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  • 15 years ago

    by BitterXSweetness

    I'm confused. R u younger or older? And either way, love is love. If u 2 love each other, that's what matters. =) Cuz sometimes the 1 we love, ppl would never understand bcuz they're not in the situation themselves and they're not u. But as long as u 2 love each other, the other things shouldn't matter. ^.^

    .:Rach:.

  • 16 years ago

    by samantha

    U did great but had no meaning

  • 16 years ago

    by samantha

    U did great but had no meaning

  • 17 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    I dont understand what you're trying to say...or your point of view...are you saying that you dont want to be with this person because their younger than you? age is just a number. a number of years, and years are just something we as humans made up to help us understand a world that we know nothing about.

  • 17 years ago

    by I will love you Forever and not a day less

    I LOVE THIS POEM ...........5/5............u put alot of emotiom in this poem .......check out someof my poems and tell me what you think .thankz and great poem again ......keep up da good work

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