Broken Girl

by XxMoonLightxX   May 3, 2007


Torn apart inside
to myself I should never have lied
there is no more hope for me
my life is a waste of time and peace

just let me die
not like you care that I cry
you hate me I might as well accept
Its all my fault I must regret

My heart still burns
because I am never going to learn
I am just standing out in the pouring rain
bearing all the pain

standing all alone
now I know I am on my own
you broke my heart
ripped my world completely apart

why should I go through everyday
living on the words you may never say
paying for my unforgivable mistake
and this is my only escape

so I hold the knife high above my head
I hope you will remember me when I am dead
goodbye cruel and heartless world
This is the ending chapter of a broken girl

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  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Me
    Peace
    ^
    Those two do not rhyme.
    I saw a bit of forced rhymed words, this one just stuck out to me the most. Just know in order to have a nice flowing poem, the rhyme can't seem forced. Keep up the great work! God Bless 5/5
    <3tay(^_^)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so heartbreaking to read.
    The depth and emotion scream through the words and the imageru creates very vivid pictures.
    I thought in some places the flow seemed a little off, but apart from that it was beautiful.
    I loved the last stanza, I thought it was intense and hardhitting and was a perfect way tp wrap up.

  • 16 years ago

    by AliveAndEmpty

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    never will I allow you to die. BAD

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